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2008-07-12 [windowframe]: Needs moar flowers. :)
2008-07-13 [Aradon Templar]: Moar flowers indeed. I also added grass, which I think looks fairly decent. Once I can get a little more flowers in the foreground, I think I shall lighten the grass a tad, then go back to messing with cumulus clouds.
2008-07-16 [Aradon Templar]: Yes, the clouds are exactly perfect, but I am disappointed with the green in the distant flowers, like the grass is too tall. I think I shall fix this, but if not, this is to be the final image. Critique while you can, if you care to :)
2008-07-16 [windowframe]: Hmm... There are still a few patches of mud around (there's one bottom left, for instance). The grass is a bit mono-tone - is ther anything you can do to change that? And the one other thing that looks unnatural is how exactly straight the horizon line is where the flowers end and the mountain begins. Is there any way you could have a bit of green going up the bottom of the mountain?
2008-07-16 [Aradon Templar]: Hmm. I cannot vary the grass color right now, unless I registered my TG2 :( The bits of brown are fine by me, since it's just dirt after all. As for the straight horizon, I could, but it looks terrible for some reason o.O
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